In this weeks lesson of Media Studies we made a presentation on Waterloo Road, this was then uploaded onto my partners blog address; http://elliottwalsh96.blogspot.co.uk/. The criticism we recieved for this is listed below:
Good use of Terminology
Good links to the theories/binary opposites
Make more attractive (GIFS, Videos)
Could have used more on editing, mise-en-scene and music, but what is there is good.
Could make it better presented and more interesting
Should mention camera shots and sounds
Nicely laid out
Good use of pictures
Good technical language
Terminology is well used
Need more on mise-en-scene
Chunks of text need breaking up
Needs a conclusion
Needs to be more appealing
More terminology but good reference to the theories
Less heavy text
Good analysis of characters and detailed
Clear understanding of structure etc
A bit text heavy, needs more pictures
Flows well, a bit short. Needs more info.
I am quite pleased with this criticism on the whole, I would improve the blog presentation further by taking the ideas of improving the presentation of it on board like breaking the text up more and adding more images, videos and colour.
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